Joe Davies ([info]ferdinand1213) wrote,
@ 2008-03-26 20:18:00
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When Students Attack - Question One
For the record, we gave them the four possible test questions two weeks in advance.  This essay should include Christopher Columbus, Vasco de Gama, and the Columbian Exchange.

Trace and explain the development of European overseas expansion from the 1400s through the 16th century.  (Consult Ch. 15 and lecture notes from January 30)


    The overseas expansion started in the 1400s with the Renaissance.  The Renaissance started with the rebirth of Italy.  Renaissance technically means rebirth, and it just so happened to start in Italy.  The leader at this time were the Medici, and the were in control of Italy during this time.  Everyone was trading with everyone.  Countries wanted to get food, gold, incense, and goods from each other, and this was known as the European overseas expansion.  When countries were trading with other countries for things that they needed to help their own country be the dominating country, the other countries started to lose.  During this time, Europe was a dominating country, because they had everything that the other countries needed.  Italy took a lot from Europe, because Italy was going broke.  They no longer had the things/supplies that they needed in order for them to survive.  Europe also did a lot of trading with England during this time as well.  England was looking for gold, and that is one of the many supplies that Europe had for them.
    Even still through the 16th century Europe was trading goods with other countries.  They would take mostly boats to trade the goods, since their was no other way to do it.  If Italy wanted goods from Europe, they would take one of their boats filled with the goods that Europe wanted in return, and they would take their boat over to Europe and unpack all of the goods that Europe wanted, and then they would fill up their boat with the goods that they themselves wanted and drive the boat (or sometimes boats) back to Italy and everyone would be happy and content with their new goods.  Then each of the countries would use their new good.  Then each of the countries would use their new goods to try and beat out each of the other countries until someone won, and someone lost.  This was fair trading so each country got what they wanted from who they wanted to help them be the best country.  This was the overseas expansion.


Another offering, which seems to include Spain as an afterthought.  Make sure to pronounce their misspelling of Genoese as Jenny-Os, like the Turkey.

    Portugal has a long sea side, where they do their trading with.  With the sea side, they are able to trade to other countries that are located across the Mediterranean Sea and the Atlantic Ocean.  The trading has helped Portugal expand as a country.  Portugal also went on an exploration to try and find spices.  They ended up finding some in India.  On their search for spices, they came across an unknown territory, which became the Indian Ocean.  Spain also looked for spices in an exploration, but they went to Africa and had no luck with that.
    With the trading overseas, European countries became very popular and population grew tremendously.  People traded with gold and silver.  The Geneose [sic] traded to the eastern countries, but soon had to change that.  When the Ottoman Empire grew, the Geneose had to trade to the western countries, such as Spain and Portugal, instead of their eastern trade.  The Portugal Royal Policy really favored the trade.  It made the country wealthy and popular.  Other countries wanted to do more trade with Portugal.
    In the late 1590s, actually in 1596, Spain had finally decided that they needed more than just trade in their country.  Spain became determined to have domestic stores open up.  Because the trading became so popular, shops, stores, and markets had shut down.  Businesses could not make it.  Once they realized that they needed businesses and not just trade, everything worked out well for the country who was going through a financial crisis.
    The trading of spices became very popular and countries' merchants were trading with Portugal for spices, who originally got the spices from India.


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[info]greenabsinthe
2008-03-27 01:46 am UTC (link)
Ahh, the smell of bullshit in the evening.

Funny how the years go by, and the amazing ability of students to absolutely bs their way through an essay question still remains.

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[info]ferdinand1213
2008-03-27 04:33 am UTC (link)
I wish this were bullshit. Bullshit gets a D. This is just shit, unfortunately, which merits a nice, solid F.

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[info]notasecretagent
2008-03-27 02:01 am UTC (link)
I like that Europe is apparently totally separate from both England and Italy. I also enjoy the detailed description of how trade works (that is, they put goods in boats, sailed the boat, took the goods out of the boat or boats, put other goods in the boat, sailed the boat away, took the goods out of the boat...) and then everyone lived happily ever after. Until someone lost.

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[info]ferdinand1213
2008-03-27 04:40 am UTC (link)
The working assumption is that the student thought Europe was located somewhere near present-day Atlantis.

On paper, that description of how trade works took one and a half blue book pages. I just can't help but think that something in their poor little noggin should have thrown a red flag for them after half a page at most.

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[info]louielouie14
2008-03-27 02:30 am UTC (link)
I just kept thinking "Nation! It's a synonym for 'country'! Say nation, damnit!"

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[info]ferdinand1213
2008-03-27 04:43 am UTC (link)
*shudders at mention of nations*

My dud class today took over five minutes to come up with a satisfactory definition of nation upon which to build a definition of nationalism. Never mind that we'd just sat through an hour long lecture from the professor about the rise of nationalism in Europe in the mid-19th century.

Sigh.

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[info]alwaysnovember
2008-03-27 03:38 am UTC (link)
My favorite part is "or sometimes boats" lol lol I love it.

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[info]ferdinand1213
2008-03-27 04:41 am UTC (link)
That parenthetical and the authoritative final sentence are my favorite parts.

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[info]louielouie14
2008-03-27 04:41 am UTC (link)
"Portugal has a long sea side."

Oooooh. Is that fancy college lingo for "a coast"?

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[info]ferdinand1213
2008-03-27 04:53 am UTC (link)
Stop throwing around your $10 words!

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